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Where are the fireworks? Where's the parade?! WHERE ARE THE HOT GUYS THAT TURN OUT TO BE GAY?!
Sike. The only straight, hot guy I need is my hubby, Mason.
SO SUCK IT!
I apologize... I'm sorry... I'm just ultra PUMPED over the sick ass comment from one of my students about MY story! Here, I have to share it with you folks (bragging rights, approved):
"Despite myself, I was grinning like an idiot while reading the end of this story. This was really a lovely read. It could've easily fallen into being overly repetitive and boring, but you're eloquent writing style and vivid descriptions kept me enthralled through until the end, and the way you interlaced memories of Dom really kept me interested and wanting to know what had happened to him and what was going to happen to Anya. You did a good job of making me feel like I was really in the park with Anya, and I felt her longing for Dom and her loneliness. It was very easy to relate to and feel for her character, and I was really happy for her when Dom showed up at the end.
There were a few times where I noticed you kind of jumped back and forth between tenses, which can make reading awkward and difficult, and can sometimes detract from what's going on in that particular line. But overall your grammar and syntax were good in this story.
I'm trying to think of more things to comment on or critique for this story, but I'm finding it difficult. Typically I'm not really that huge of a fan of these kinds of stories, and more often than not I prefer sad endings, or ones that leave you guessing or don't perfectly wrap everything up, but your story just made me feel happy and left me with a warm feeling, so thank you for that.
Thank you for sharing!"
This person obviously deserves a hug.
I'm tense for the other comments I'll be getting tomorrow...
I'm hoping for more positive comments such as the one I posted above.
Today was laid back. I hung out on my computer all day. Mason and I hung out all day, too, which was fabulous.
We're STILL hanging out for a matter of fact!
Like a bunch of badasses!
I've also been watching Two Best Friends Play, a series on YouTube. I highly recommend it for gamers or video game lovers of any sort.
Or for people who have humor.
Matt and Pat are too funny. :)
Tomorrow, I'll be doing nothing again. Just a bit of homework until doing nothing... again.
I hope everyone's days are going swimmingly!
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